Feedback from Pitch

From our feedback
we can see that the
pitch did not display the narrative of our title sequence and film very well so we will have to display this in a clearer way and add more detail and information so that people understand our narrative and idea for our film.
It was also said that we did not match the genre of thriller through how we explained our narrative so we will have to explain

so that the audience can link the idea to the genre better.

One thing that w did do well is the casting as people agreed that the casting would be suitable to the roles and film and would attract an audience due to their star power and previous films that are similar. We will make a new pitch which has the improvement within it so we can therefore show the narrative more clearly and fit the 

 genre whilst making the film more appealing.